Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
life today is more comfortable and convenient than ever. modern society has produced some amazing
innovations that have radically transformed our daily habits and intimate relationships. however, many
are concerned that the way we live now will have a negative impact on future generations. I totally agree.
our current behavior will definitely hurt future societies because we waste too many resources and use
too much energy.
Humans are producing more garbage than ever. every year the rate of waste increases as the population
continues to expand. And much of this garbage isn't recyclable. A few years back, I was living in New York
City. I was surprised to see garbage cans on almost every street corner that were constantly filled to the
brim. My own small apartment building, with only ten apartments, had over a hundred bags of garbage by
the end of every week. And I'm just as guilty of waste as everyone else. I filled up a whole garbage can with
random junk almost every day. There is so much waste that could be easily avoided. we could be using
washable towels, instead of paper towels, portable mugs, instead of disposable coffee cups, just to name a
few. I fear that humans in the future will have to pay for the waste we are creating today.
Not only does the amount of waste we currently generate harm to the environment, but so does the
energy we consume. we still rely on fossil fuels to power our cars and heat our homes. The electric
companies that supply citizens with the energy needed to live still use coal and natural gas. every day we
are pumping an enormous amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, speeding up the rate of global
warming. however, few people have changed, including me. In the summertime, I have the air conditioner
on at the highest possible setting. In the winter, I make sure every room in the house is warm. every day I
burn fossil fuels and contribute to the pollution problem. I enjoy a comfortable modern life filled with
convenience, but hardly ever consider how these decisions may harm others in the future.
While it's true that life today is more comfortable than ever, I believe our current habits will have a
negative impact on the future. The massive amount of garbage and fossil fuels we consume and waste is
already contributing to climate change. we must make better decisions about waste and energy today, to
ensure a better tomorrow.
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...ions about waste and energy today, to ensure a better tomorrow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93285371703 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51497136016 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544364508393 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2473557746 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4642857143 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8928571429 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.39285714286 5.45110844103 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189014124826 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463547825719 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074984944767 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542270025029 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736164964078 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.