Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreign countries.
Since the beginning of this century, in the distinctive civilized societies, it has been a controversial argument among individuals, through which numerous conflicts have been engendered. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that traveling in your own country is more utilitarian than traveling overseas, while others consider this issue in a whole diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all the opposite attitudes I strongly concur with the idea that traveling to other countries are more beneficial than traveling in your own country. The outstanding reasons for my opinion would be explored as follows.
First and foremost, one can get familiar with other cultures by traveling to foreign countries. My point is that almost everyone knows his/her own culture in to a great extent, since he/she lives in that culture. In contrast, there are too many cultures that people even do not know of. Hence, it is a great opportunity to get familiar with the way that people think, live, and so on by traveling to their countries. For instance, once I traveled to the neighbor country, India, I have to say that I was impressed that they were happy in spite of all the dilemmas they had to face by virtue of living in crowded places. They hold annual festivals to celebrate their life, and it was astounding to me.
In addition to getting familiar with other cultures, one is able to attract tourists to his/her own country. As far as I am concerned, people are influenced by both good behavior and kindness. Not only could one be treated well in a foreign country but also he/she could encourage foreigners to visit his/her own country. In my point of view, each tourist is like a walking advertisement; that is, he/ she would be able to advertise in favor of his/her own country.
Beyond knowing other cultures and attracting tourists, individuals would be able to capture new ideas in order to found a brand new business in their own country. To illustrate, my friend, called Sarah, once traveled to Mexico and she found their local food, named Taco, delicious. Therefore, when she came back to our country Iran, she founded a new restaurant in Tehran, serving Tacos. It was beneficial both for her and her costumers.
Apart from the point that has been mentioned above, there is also another reason that deserves some words here and it is that life is too short and our globe has too many places in which we have never been. I am absolutely confident that all the people often travel in their own country in holidays. In fact, some people travel to one city over and over. For example, many Iranian citizens tend to travel to northern cities of Iran because of the beautiful Jungles, the Caspian Sea that north of Iran has. However, if they keep traveling to the same place they will not be able to either observe or learn a new phenomenal thing.
By way of conclusion, based on the aforementioned arguments, I utterly agree with the statement that traveling to foreign countries has more benefits for individuals rather than traveling in their own country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'in spite of', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197969543147 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.165820642978 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106598984772 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592216582064 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0676818950931 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133671742809 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0490693739425 0.0351676179071 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65593701431 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0439932318105 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0626057529611 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135363790186 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118443316413 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3115.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 530.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87735849057 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332075471698 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267924528302 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198113207547 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120754716981 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65593701431 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.4249597871 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0833333333 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0249764007 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.791666667 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.791666666667 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 48.8757861635 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.30057803468 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382463859259 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.090798580882 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733526699454 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512200903329 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169729894388 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133776056282 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101703996326 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317469735085 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0669684595912 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255861835614 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103035902512 0.0618886996521 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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