people benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreign countries.
traveling is one of the most important element in everybody life to get more knowledge/benefits and improve own health. in this regard, some prople hold the view that foreign traveling has more advantages in comparision with interior traveling. while, others have opposite view. as far as I am concerned, the latter point carrier more weight because, not only traveling in our countary provide more benefits for own people like improve roads and highway and resulted to improving the pubic transportion system for destinction city, inhance the local people’s income, but also experience new life styles, and familior with other city.
first, why I vote for traveling in my county? I stand behind it because I can influence on economic system of my country. How? high demand for traveling in country, encourage government to improve the quality and quantitiy of roads and highways. in addition, each city if has a modern public transportation system is more apt to receive more tourists rather than one city without any bus or metro. these by default leading to increase the annual income per capita for those people who live in dectinction city. for example, resturant in city is one another factor affects in diminish the unemployement rate in tourists city. as a result, it give a hope to young people who would like to make money through part time or full time job. finally, traveling in country can boom economy in those country.
second, as a wise person siad, if you want to become a wiser, you not only have to read tousands books, but also have to travel tousands miles. through traveling in any country, especially in our country, you can experience new lifestyles, and new culture in contacting with people who have different lifestyles and cultural background. so, there are chances to establish our individuals networks, will promote our bussiness in future. small example may give some light to this point, when I think Lut desert people, who live in the middel of Iran, I think poverty, poor people, and various disease, but never had I realized how amazing area is untile I travled there. you can find generous and sympathetic people with stong culture that infulence your attitude.
However, some peole may vote such a plan for traveling to foreign countary on an vage ground, like persige, or seeing beautiful landscape,or eating vaarious delicious foods, or so forth. but, I srtongly believe that, all of these are available in own country. as many tourists confess, a competent guider is the key to deal with. he/she by discrimination choice of places can equipe tourists with insightfull view over the whole things in those area and can give them rewarding experience related to those places.
in conclusion, taking all into account, there are more benefits through traveling in our own country than foreign country. thrivial economy, experience new lifestyles and culture are only mere benefits for this purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13195876289 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71828908448 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558762886598 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8588595105 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.217391304 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0869565217 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283986634114 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081091206705 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938280186129 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178201295228 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991878220567 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.