Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
traveling is the best way to promote a healthy life as well as the economy of a country as a whole. people will benefit very well through traveling either in their own country or foreign country. A lot of benefits come in a visited country, so in my view, visiting your own country benefits people greater than a visit to a foreign country as it preserves more to go domestic currency outside the country and increase the gross domestic product of the country.
domestic tourism keeps a monetary system inside there own country. people invest a lot of money on the expedition; there is a greater chance of money of the people to go outside a country; but, preferring a destination of the expedition in the domestic land, money indeed, money rests in the own nation. On the other hand, people will get a job inside their own home country that certainly promotes a life of upliftment. people run their businesses like a hotel, guides, guest house, boating, etc even at the time there is a less foreign tourist.
Similarly, people expedition in their own country promotes domestic tourism in an excessive way. In other words, a certain number of people feel safe to run their own business in the field of tourism which can profit a person very huge amount. due to domestic tourism, hiking in the different mountains in nepal is established; trekking in rara, ghyangfefi,etc still popular destination for the youth of the country. In addition to trekking, Bangi jump and paragliding are two entrepreneurship establish in nepal. indeed domestic tourism foster this kind of trend in nepal that ultimately improves the gross domestic product of a country.
In conclusion, domestic tourism promotes the life of people by providing employment and preventing the money to go out of the nation. so it is always a clear choice for the people to choose over foreign travel over domestic travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88161993769 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73099115899 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1270708234 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201157635673 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813836832198 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720674635918 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138707469971 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709193519601 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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