From one to eighteen year age is considered as child age. This life stage is most important phase of ones life. The thing you learn in this phase will remain with you life long. This age is also called as initial learning phase. The brain get developed fully up to age five. The Children are curious to learn new things. If we can teach them many things.
If we let them spend their time in front of computer, gaming will surely pass the time. But they will waste their time. Once we start to games our mind will say that lets finish one more level and one more and more this will take end up spending valuable time. There was news few days ago Blue whale game addict boy killed himself just to clear the lavels. in another incident Boy was continuously playing PUB-G for 8 hrs suffered from heartache in this early age.
One of my neighbor has 10 yr old kid. He used to spend his all free time on playing games. He had lost his interest in studying, playing outdoor games and making new friends. As a result he failed in exam. Parents figured what the problem was. initially it was difficult to stop his addiction of games but now he is doing well and made some new friend too. We need to understand that there is life waiting on door outside the computer
Playing game is not proper use of computer. We can use computer for lots of purposes like surfing internet for certion information, preparing presentations, making calculation and drawing and painting. We can teach our child about proper use of computer. My younger brother was struggling to finish his assignment of recycling of different metals. So he went through internet he found someone who lives in India was working on the same topic. The boy from India helped him to complete his assignment on time. In My opinion playing games on computer is wasting time and time is precious once spend will never come back. So it is necessary to spend time wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5100286533 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27052369978 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575931232092 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5197461543 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5384615385 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4230769231 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.96153846154 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16399080127 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456872231968 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515585290817 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09775740724 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264792691951 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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