Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern life have turned human beings into 24/7 working machines that work day and night to cover their expenses and put aside a little saving. This amount of busyness has caused many individuals to be satisfied by simply getting the things done. There has been an argument among scholars if people can do few things well in spite of being busy over doing so many things. As far as I am concerned, I believe that, at their best condition, people manage to do a few task well because they are very busy. In what follows two elaborate reasons will vindicate my point of view.
The first noteworthy reason to mention is that because people are busy, they don't have much time to spend it on acquiring cutting edge material about their specialty. Due to this fact they will be obsolete quickly. It is a well established point that being up to date is a key factor in doing the modern world affairs right. Moreover because individuals do not practice the things they are good at, after a short while their skill got stains and the more time passes over, the slower they get. Take a personal experience as an example. A friend of mine was working as a software developer and he was busy all the time doing two or three projects simultaneously. He had isolated himself from the outside world for months to get the jobs done on time. After s few months he completed the project and delivered to the customer. Finally he got paid fully but after a while he found out that the problems that he was trying to design solutions for was dealt with a new technique and he realized that months of his life was thrown away because he was not their when field was revolutionizing. Had he not made himself busy that much, he would have been able to learn those new techniques.
The second vital point to bear in mind is that people cannot focus on what they do in order to excel in the task on hand. Their available time is limited and it is nearly impossible to concentrate on every task which does not allow them to pay attention to details. Moreover human beings have a certain amount of attention span and by spending it on various amount of tasks, it will be used up and the capability of being good in a subject matter decreases. Had it been enough time for people
In conclusion, Because of the busy lifestyle that people have got, their ability to excel at doing various tasks has decreased. I believe that the reason is that people have lost their concentration on their affairs and also because they don't have the chance to update their own knowledge.
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- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific arguments presented in the reading passage 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: Finally,
... project and delivered to the customer. Finally he got paid fully but after a while he ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39203246346 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1746030761 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243057767187 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798808985849 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879367052044 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161559979216 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830049746804 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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