Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of the society, a considerable number of people are found to live a busy life and have to multitask more frequently. In light of this situation, some people put forward the argument that people could do very few things well since they are busy doing many different things. However, I disagree with this proposition for the following reasons.
Initially, technologies make it possible for us to do many different things well. To be specific, technologies have saved us a lot of time and energy and provide us with the potential to accomplish more different things well. My sister Fiona’s experience could well be used to attest to this argument. Last year, Fiona had to prepare for the TOEFL test on top of her regular coursework at school. It was time consuming to take off-line TOEFL tutorial lessons because of the traffic congestion, so Fiona chose to study with a teacher online for one hour each day. The online teacher graduated from Harvard University with rich teaching experience, and they had smooth communication using the instant messaging application, Wechat. As a result, Fiona learned very efficiently and passed the TOEFL test with a high grade of 117 while getting As in most of her tests at school. Without the technology, Fiona could not have had access to such good education resources and handled so many different tasks in an efficient way. Thus, I am convinced that though people are busy doing so many different things, they can do many things well.
Moreover, people’s improving ability to plan and organize enables them to do many things well. Most people nowadays are equipped with the ability to plan and organize, so theycan manage their time effectively and accomplish many tasks well. For instance, my roommate, Laura, made a detailed plan for her university life even before her freshman year began, including how long to spend studying every day, what courses to take, what extracurricular activities to participate in, and when to take the GRE test. Over the course of her undergraduate study, she strictly followed her plan and studied her major English with high focus, while learning Japanese as a minor and participating in a two-year volunteer teaching program. Despite the busy schedule she had, she received a final GPA of 3.87 out of 4.0. As a result, she was admitted to the graduate school of Brown University with a teaching assistantship last month. Therefore, I believe that though people are busy doing so many different things, they can do many things well.
Admittedly, opponents argue that multitasking will result in the overconsumption of energy and lead to poor performances. However, with the help of technology, we are able to save a lot of energy, so working on many tasks at the same time with satisfying outcomes becomes possible. Hence, I tend to believe that people can do many things well though they are busy doing so many different things.
In a nutshell, based on the discussions above, I can safely draw the conclusion that people can do many things well though they are busy doing so many different things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2605.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00961538462 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78536897474 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9846587785 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.409090909 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427838382931 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153090858767 0.076458572812 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159163897445 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305360117978 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053762846084 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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