Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
At the turn of the new decade, no one can turn a blind eye to numerous effects of the Internet on people’s information. However, some researchers claim enhance of people’s information have some adverse side-effects on people’s lives, but I believe acquiring much information through the Internet not only reduce our problems but also is a solution to solve the problems and helps us how to meet with a problem. In the following paragraphs, I will explore my reasons.
The first reason why I believe applicants that get much information by using the Internet can reduce their problems is that they can face either directly or indirectly with their problems that have been solving with someone on the other side of the world. It is clear, without having much information and knowing how to search the problems, we cannot completely solve some of them. My own experience demonstrates this concept. My friend’s laptop had a big problem although he searched a lot on the Internet to find a solution, he could not solve it since he did not have much information of his laptop, so he started to read about a different aspect of its pieces on the Internet. Finally, after one week and improving his information, he solved the problem. Needless to say, he became so interested that in improving the computer’s information by searching on the Internet that nowadays he is professional in the computer field and has one of the most famous repairing store in our city.
Another reason why I believe much information do not create problems is that having broad information in different domains helps us to deal with the challenges better than before. In the past literate people had only one way to look for their information_ reading books; however, today people not only access to lots of books but also can be connected to the Internet and look for different information in the shortest time. It is clear with increasing our information we can develop our self-confidence in a meeting with a problem, so we have a higher chance to solve than someone does have lower information. Indeed, if people do not have much information about different science today, they will suffer a lot.
In conclusion, I strongly believe much information that acquire via the Internet provide a comfortable life for people. This is because they can quickly find the solution and help them to meet with problems very well in comparison with the past.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94262058884 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48786407767 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3085067041 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4666666667 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271817831755 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963155752134 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514938174742 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181586432008 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431328012756 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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