Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.

Through history education has played prominent role in all societies. education has a direct impact on human social life. it is understandable at a glance that the school is not only a place for teaching math, chemistry or algebra but also is a place for teaching a good and ideal life style from lower ages. discipline is one of the prerequisite for better life style.
discipline is as important as education. most people who have discipline in their lives are more successful than those who do not.
I believe that most students who are neat have more chance for success than those who aren’t. but like everything, it not inevitable.
The first reason that supports my idea is that, the history shows that the most successful people are organized.
In my opinion if someone is tidy in her/his personal life, her/his will be organized in own brain. Mind organization is very important and is one of the necessary prerequisite for success. As a personal experience when I was in middle school, I wasn’t very organized and most of the time I failed my exams but when I go university I changed my behaviors and became more ordinary. Absolutely this change has very good impact on my scours and even my lifestyle.
The second reason I would like to bring here is that, the children with good habit (like discipline) at early ages, will be more successful in their future personal live.
In adulthood disorganization will bother our partner in all kind of relationships.
To illustrate my cousin has a disordered boyfriend, he was a very nice and handsome boy but she wasn’t satisfied with their relationship and she was uncomfortable to continue their relationship.
To wrap it up I content that discipline has direct impact on personal life and work life success.
If schools spend more attention and time to teaching students discipline, it’s not only would be very useful in their daily lives, but also it will guarantee their future lives.
but as I said before nothing is inevitable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
...played prominent role in all societies. education has a direct impact on human social lif...
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...s a direct impact on human social life. it is understandable at a glance that the ...
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Suggestion: Discipline
...d and ideal life style from lower ages. discipline is one of the prerequisite for better l...
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Suggestion: Discipline
...he prerequisite for better life style. discipline is as important as education. most peop...
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Suggestion: Most
...iscipline is as important as education. most people who have discipline in their liv...
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Suggestion: But
...for success than those who aren't. but like everything, it not inevitable. Th...
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... it will guarantee their future lives. but as I said before nothing is inevitable....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93235294118 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90994446968 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2946131375 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2631578947 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214148707828 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593759436669 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877987979281 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862955958811 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955598686552 0.0645574589148 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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