Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.
Since the beginning of time, organization, has played a prevailing role in every individual's life. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among academicians about students' neat and their management about personal jobs. No one can deny the direct and indirect effects of the organization on success, but some people are leading proponents of the claim that have clean and organized rooms don't have any relate to will be succeed, and also some might maintain that, who keep their rooms very well organized, have caused some problems, such as, be monotonous in all aspect of their lives. I firmly contended that at most of the times the students who have more attention on their rooms organization, have more chance to be success and its advantages carry more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into three conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students or peoples which are neat and well organized in tiny samples like as their rooms, we can say that these students have perfect organization in their huge social life's problems. To illustrate, I would like to mention the available statistics about this issue. According to statistics above 70 percent of the students that keep their rooms neat and organized, can handle their life problems better than students which are indifference about their personal cleaning and organization.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that students which have mentioned features, almost have less stress, and they can reduce their stresses' really better than students that have messy or nasty rooms, in stressful situations. As an example, when I was a child lots of times I did not have any attention to cleaning of my room, and when my room got well messy, in the darkness I think some of my toys would transform to something like ghost or devil.
Finally, in addition to what was mentioned above, as recent studies have revealed that students who keep their rooms clean and organized will be more discipline and have well time management. In the other words, they have plan for their daily activities, that is one of the characters of succeed people. The modern world offers numerous examples of these last studies, one of the best examples is Japan territory. In Japan, near all of the people, specifically students, have incredible time management with short and long plan for their future, and its result is that Japan is one of the most modern countries.
To make a long story short, we can assert that students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more probably to succeed than students who do not. Taking all the aforementioned into account, it can be concluded that majority of students who keep their rooms neat have less stress in pressure situations, more likely to be on-time and really better organization in their social life. Consequently, it is highly recommended that schools pay more attention to this issue, and from my viewpoint it is necessary that schools and teachers consider some points for students rooms’ neat and disciplined.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
..., has played a prevailing role in every individuals life. In this regard, there is a long-s...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...aim that have clean and organized rooms dont have any relate to will be succeed, and...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...nagement. In the other words, they have plan for their daily activities, that is one...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ples is Japan territory. In Japan, near all of the people, specifically students, have inc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23292469352 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.15761821366 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0910683012259 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402802101576 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0630472854641 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119089316988 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0367775831874 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70359835864 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0245183887916 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0718038528897 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0227670753065 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0297723292469 0.0139019557991 214% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3116.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 517.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02707930368 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326885880077 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247582205029 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20502901354 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129593810445 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70359835864 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479690522244 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 56.2070329966 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 30.4117647059 20.5533526081 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3667112237 48.84282405 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.294117647 120.699889404 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4117647059 20.5533526081 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 55.1699852088 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.48993288591 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392696422331 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13931503257 0.103427244359 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822853508549 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584414880979 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167987740489 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171380052685 0.114077575197 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126926776999 0.0781384742642 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368461535108 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598923390762 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271216041317 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105715652697 0.0618886996521 171% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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