Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success in life sometimes requires getting out of the comfort zone. Many people believe that successful people always try doing new things than doing the same things that they used to do in their whole life. I agree with this opinion and in the following, my reasons will be explained with details and examples.
First of all, taking risks usually opens new opportunities during the life journey. some people discover their hobbies and the jobs that might be professionals in it by chance. for instance, after graduating from university, I have taken a risk by traveling from my country to UAE to look for job opportunities and eventually, I have found my dream job in Dubai with a high salary and best offer. All in all, trying new things and getting out from comfort zone always give you better chances to become a successful person.
Secondly, trying new things would always increase your knowledge. Taking a risk than doing what you know how to do well would improve your skills in new fields and enrich your experience in life. For example, in the last year, I attended Japanese language classes, this experience has taught me a lot about Japanese culture and language which opened my eyes to a different culture and galvanized me to accept different people. all in all, taking risks is an important step toward increasing the knowledge and cultivating experience.
Thirdly, taking risks develops the personal characteristic of people. Doing something new that an individual has never done before would increase his/ her confidence and self-esteem, which are the most two critical and crucial tools in success. For instance, after traveling to a new country and starting my professional, my self-esteem has climbed dramatically.
To sum up, successful people always take a risk and avoid doing things that they used to do in their life. for three reasons, taking risk increase the confidence, open new opportunities and finally enrich human knowledge and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, you know, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1472392638 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75678654076 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.101292862 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366346225948 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124538351533 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13554241692 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221638347249 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102923374984 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.