Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of the humanity, the human beings have been engaged in a great struggle to pave the way of approaching to a high level of knowledge, which has been reached via thoughtful teachers who have always been sacrificed to do so. In today's world, yet, there is a heated controversy as to examine whether teachers are more acclaimed than before or not. Although Some people are of the opinion that there is not any social value for the teachers anymore, some other believe the otherwise. I, personally, subscribe to the ideas which states although teachers in the past had a great social value, they are not valued by other citizens anymore for a couple of reasons, which two of them are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first evidence which reveals the aforementioned idea is the low wages which the teachers are given nowadays. Every year statistics have illustrated that one of the lowest average salaries among different vocations is given to the teachers. Yet, their job is not only a hard kind of occupation, but many of them do not have a flexible work time to handle. Take, for instance, a teacher who should be available at the school at seven o clock to prepare the teaching materials before student’s entrance, while most of the other people arrive at their workplace at least at eight o clock. Moreover, this teacher might be at school full time, there is not any coffee time, and even he or she might be available on the weekends to do school-related jobs such as preparing exam materials or answering parent questions. Albeit, there are many other hard jabs without a flexible work time, but of course, teaching is not an easy job to handle and so one might question why there should be the lowest salary for the teachers?
In addition, nowadays most of the schools are private ones which means the parents who have paid lots of money for their children studies, expect for their teachers to be perfect. It does not simply mean that the teachers are becoming more professional. If we look in-depth we will figure out that it is such an inevitable fact of the schools that most of the teachers are not really perfect. As a case in point, a considerable parent who is facing some blemishes in one of his or her child's teacher, of course, won't be satisfied till finding a really professional teacher for her or his child, who might never be available at the school. It might lead to a disappointment in the parents and as a repercussion, most of the teacher will lose their value among the parents who are a main part of the society.
To make a long story short, in today's hectic lifestyle of the human beings, not only have been inclined the teacher's value but they are undermined most of the time. There is sufficient evidence which supports this idea, to name but two, the low salary of the teachers, and, the parent's high expectation of the teacher especially at private schools, are the most considerable ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...reover, this teacher might be at school full time, there is not any coffee time, and even...
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Message: Did you mean 'and so on' (="etc.")?
Suggestion: and so on
..., teaching is not an easy job to handle and so one might question why there should be the ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eachers are becoming more professional. If we look in-depth we will figure out tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, as to, at least, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69825918762 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62682491554 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47582205029 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8913557615 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.882352941 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4117647059 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107577443407 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429260711262 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251571387778 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746203402254 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222452533546 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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