Teaching is a novel profession and generally teachers are highly respected in a society. In our childhood we both fear and respect our teachers. With the advancement of technology, life and society has been tremendously changed by this time. A controversial question which is often raised is that whether teachers are respected and valued by society today compared to the past. From my perspective I believe that in most cases teachers are somewhat neglected in society. Essential and persuasive evidence will be provided in the following paragraphs to verify my judgement.
Whenever I think of teacher of my childhood time, I see a learned person who dedicated his life to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected to be a teacher and they were considered like gems in the society. Therefore, when a person gained enough knowledge and motivated to be a pedagogy, it was much appreciated in the society. However, things have been changed a lot today and now teaching becomes a job like other professional sectors. People without much knowledge or dedication might get involved into this profession. This situation gradually decreases faith and respect on them.
In addition, another important factor contributes to degradation of teaching profession. In this competitive world, people always look for money and salary becomes a key factor while choosing any career path. As salary has not been increased proportionally compared to other sectors, educated people do not find it attractive to pursue career in teaching. Moreover, many teachers are now getting involved in unethical ways to make money. For instance, in my city, private coaching centers are rising fast and some teachers always try to force students to get private coaching rather than learning in school. Therefore, inadequate salary and greediness of some people causes humiliation of this novel job.
Last but not least, with the advancement of technology, people can get educational resources online free of cost. Thus, one might think that it is easier to learn something using online resources. Consequently, students do not feel the importance of teacher in their life, as they can get every resources online. In our childhood, it was not as easy as it is now and at that time we could not make any progress without support of our teachers. Therefore, we are much grateful to our teachers to help our growth.
To wrap it up, I must say that a novel profession like teaching has been deteriorated due to many reasons and teachers are not much respected and somewhat neglected in currents society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
... to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13348946136 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87240901754 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51756440281 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2196241258 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134073128838 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355238310709 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460024903273 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711390667179 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278115764085 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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