Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travel is one of the best choices for spending the vacation. In this regard, there is a longstanding discussion among the people whether it is better to travel by tour or themselves. The variety of people hold an opinion that the advantages of traveling by tour outweigh drawbacks. From my perspective, it seems convincing and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my points of view cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the leader helps us to visit the various places that we even have not heard the name, let alone to go there. Thus, traveling by tour open the new window for us especially in places that are less frequent. To take a personal experience as an example, when I traveled to South Africa, I completely confused and could not the tourist location, if I did not go with a tour. Apart from this, the tour easily provides and reserve a hotel or hostel that if we want to do it by ourselves not only might pay more money but also it takes time.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that traveling alone accompanied by some risks and dangers. As a matter of fact, as we are not familiar with the culture and rules in that country, it is plausible we are rubbed by our bags or they deceive us. In fact, we heard that some countries are not as safe as they must be and strongly supposed to be very careful when communicating in the city or in touristy locations. These problems become more serious when we could not speak in that language.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that in some conditions traveling by tour might be expensive, nevertheless, it is not necessary to have a plan and make a program for it because the tour does all the works. For many people in my country, getting a visa a time-consuming and risky work. As a result, this could be done readily by the tour.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that tour facilated the travel by taking the valuable considerations. Consequently, it is highly recommended that for having a safe and luxurious travel to opt for the tour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d luxurious travel to opt for the tour.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, apart from, in brief, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61333333333 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81507055368 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8153793664 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161315635161 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055412024725 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379097795039 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967061156755 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376554511174 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.