Travelling plays an essential role in our life. By traveling, we can discover the world around us, knowing other people's culture and widen my knowledge. There are many ways for travelling. In my opinion, I think the best way to travel in a group led by a tour guide. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, travelling in a group led by a tour guide is so interesting. The tour guide has a lot of experience to book the best hotel with reasonable price, and has a lot of information about the country we are going to visit such as the best places and the best restaurants. For instance, two years ago, I traveled to Paris. I was travelling alone. I just went to the Eiffel Tower, the museum of louver, and some other places. Actually, this travelling disappointed me because i felt board and it was under my expectation. However, last year, I repeated this trip to Paris but in a group led by a tour guide. I felt so interesting because there are many people with me that we can chat together. Also, the service in the hotel was so amazing. Furthermore, I visited many amazing places that I had not visit when I was solo such as the countryside. Really, i was admired with the landscapes there and i ate delicious food there. Hence, travelling with a tour guide is so exciting because he helped me to have unforgettable journey.
Second of all, travelling in a group led by a tour guide is a time saving. The tour guide know well how to schedule for the trip because it is about his reputation. For instance, during my travelling to Paris, I visited many places in five days only. Everyone has his own paper with the place we will visit, and we go directly to the places without wasting any time. However, when I was travelling alone, I got lost many times. it took me hours to reach the place I wanted to visit. So, travelling with a tour guide is a time management.
To sum up, I think the best way to travel is in group led by a tour guide. I feel this way for two reasons, it is so interesting and to save time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, second, so, well, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32051282051 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60231146936 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451282051282 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.292677376 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8076923077 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34615384615 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259005695437 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842065979455 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853359980322 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196916923562 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527961511209 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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