Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important way to improve people’s health is to clean the environment.
By and large, people are fussier about their health than before. So, they inclined to develop new solutions for improving their health. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among individuals whether cleaning the environment is the best way to increase people’s health or not. Some people may hold the view that cleaning the environment is the most significant way to cope with health issues, others take an opposite viewpoint. I personally contend that cleaning the environment is not the most important way to reach this while there are effective solutions. I will elaborate on these solutions through three reasonable reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that no one can neglect the fact that people’s health is more dependent on his or her foods. The more someone eats junk foods and fast foods, the more he or she will face health problems. According to a recent study that has been published in Time magazine, more than 90 percent of people who suffer from heart disease used to consume junk food as the main part of their meals. Additionally, the research has shown that fast foods not only contain lots of salt and fat but also they are the remarkable reasons for blood pressure. Consequently, informing people about their food habits can pave the way for improving their health more than cleaning the environment.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that air pollution is one the most substantial factors of health problems. It’s generally agreed that those who live in crowded cities face this dilemma more than others. In this regard, devising effective strategies for reducing air pollution levels seems to be more important than cleaning the environment. Take Tehran – the capital of Iran- as an example, when I was a young child, people who live there have various challenges especially during the winter season that air is more polluted. In addition, most of statistics from medical institutions depicted that death increase in winter seasons due to air pollution. By developing hybrid cars, most of Tehran citizens have required to apply these advanced cars for their daily commuting. Taking this tactic in Tehran municipality has lost the death toll.
Finally, yet importantly, it would be no exaggeration if someone says that the economic well-being of people increased thanks to industrial developments. Additionally, wealthy people spend more time to keep themselves fit and devote more budget to use organic foods. Therefore, people who live with a better financial situation would have better health status. In other words, although cleaning the environment can open doors for improving their health, elevating their economic situation would assist humankind to have a healthy life in a long term. Besides, developing exercising facilities such as playing houses and bodybuilding centers enables people to boost their health.
In brief, based on aforementioned reason one can logically draw the conclusion that cleaning the environment would not be the most important way to increase people’s health while there are better options such as adjusting people’s lifestyle to be more healthy and devising methods and strategies and methods for reducing air pollution that is the main factor of people’s death in polluted cities. However, there are other reasons and examples, challenging these reasons, which not mentioned above. All in all, it is generally recommended that a survey can assess the profound results of this decision and might present a better solution to this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...ve various challenges especially during the winter season that air is more polluted. In addition,...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the statistics') or simply say ''most statistics''.
Suggestion: most of the statistics; most statistics
...that air is more polluted. In addition, most of statistics from medical institutions depicted that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in brief, in fact, such as, by and large, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3015.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80001593892 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501754385965 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 909.9 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5293533758 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.961538462 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34615384615 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269569253568 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763574374582 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067995275502 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167805560705 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649894664251 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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