Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
since the dawn of civilization, human beings are perpetually supposed to respect each other and not interfere others’ lives due to living in community. The invertible question has been engendered among critics there are tough laws for young people should follow in contemporary era or not. some of them are inclined the opinion that having strict restriction on the process of live brings about success ones in the future. Nevertheless, others believe otherwise. I firmly subscribe the former group on account of some conspicuous reasons, two of which will be delved into ensuring paragraphs.
The first exquisite reason makes me hold to the belief is that personality traits enhance. Needless to say, when young people commence to obey tough restriction, in the beginning would be hard, however after a while get accustomed to circumstance, To keep obeying this trend renders adolescent being organized in wide aspects of lives. In addressing to the causation and pros and cons of this issue, the noteworthy intelligible research published in American Journal that revealed that adult population who led their youth with strict societies bore well developed characteristics. this study was conducted in various parts of the US to prevent bias.
Another reason deserving some words here is that to have property and prosperity. Once people are confined themselves with tough restrictions start adapting and implement in various parts of their lives. To elaborate more, they would stimulate some rules analogous to society laws to achieve their goals in lives. my experience is given to shed more light on the matter. I grew up in a community with strict laws that taught me to have tough laws in my life to come my dreams true. To get admitted to a prestige university, I planned severely to study 12 hours a day. my efforts yielded greater harvest since I have a decent job in my country.
In summation, pursuant I alluded to some evidences above, one can draw the conclusion that the strict laws are expected from young population to obey not also does it cultivates their personality, but also leads to be successful. Although the effect amplitude of this issue varies from minor to major spectrum, more aptly-surveyed investigation are required to determine other involving factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20161290323 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88687525431 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2527597852 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128033375016 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032150356463 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339662759984 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704412329484 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146731564164 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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