TPO 25 Integrated

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...some reasons that the founded clay jars werent somekind of ancient batteries, it seems...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... have to notice that these vessels were find by ordinary people who not trained to s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...nders comes up, we have to know that it isnt convincing enough for not using the cyl...
^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r not using the cylinders as a battery. it could be first used as anything else an...
^^
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...ery. At last, its obvious that there werent any elecrtical devices to use battery, ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... to show the power and magic to others! because electricity in invisible and its a grea...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s! because electricity in invisible and its a great way to have others attention wi...
^^^
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...y to have others attention with tricks. moreover, now we use electricity for mild shocki...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 199.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78894472362 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46405435196 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8702428179 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.833333333 110.228320801 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338382471487 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153882227294 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484810008892 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184226469487 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357704326018 0.0443174109184 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.