Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the time immemorial from the history of the human, the revolution made possible only through the active engagement of the younger blood. communities may drive through the vision from the season person but the enthusiasm of younger one is always paramount in the development. however, I believe that younger people may have estrange from the community service today because of the no feeling of goosebumps on society and heavy enticement in the luxury.
To begin with, younger people grown up by learning the principle of isolation and luxury. Who cares is the prevalent cognition can found in the mind of most of the younger people. they live most of the live with in solitude and indulgence in the luxury like going disco, riding,travelling, gaming,etc. In contemporary situation, to expect younger people for community service is too far; they are in the situation where they even give a glance about what is happening to the society. So expectation from younger people for helping community is being very rare and strange.
Furthermore, most of the people lives in the life of the fantasy due to sophisticated media. Actor and actress are the prime most influencers for their lives. As movies and pop star mostly depicts the unrealistic attitude they focus on coping this nonsense character. Consequently, they lives in the non existence world and rarely have thought in the community building process. For instance, when I was in college, my friends and I had hardly participate in the community program. we focused mainly in the moment of enjoyment and imitation from the film star. In one incident, we had evaded the community cleaning program for watching movie. Clearly, the scenario shows the growing distress of the younger people in the aspect of the community.
Finally, lacking encouragement in younger people to think about the community is major issue for their no involvement in the community. On the past, the scenario was different, people were often taught about the principle why and how should develop our nation; and particularly their role in the community. however, todays people are show busy and negligent, they hardly care about this aspects.
In conclusion, younger people need to take part in community program for the betterment of the society. The negative factors may keep away youth to join these program. however, by providing awareness to realize their duty, it can be solved to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communities
...active engagement of the younger blood. communities may drive through the vision from the s...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...is always paramount in the development. however, I believe that younger people may have...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'estranged'.
Suggestion: estranged
... I believe that younger people may have estrange from the community service today becaus...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the principle of isolation and luxury. Who cares is the prevalent cognition can fo...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...the mind of most of the younger people. they live most of the live with in solitude ...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , travelling
...e in the luxury like going disco, riding,travelling, gaming,etc. In contemporary situation,...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...e going disco, riding,travelling, gaming,etc. In contemporary situation, to expect y...
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Line 13, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itude they focus on coping this nonsense character. Consequently, they lives in t...
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Line 13, column 289, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...nonsense character. Consequently, they lives in the non existence world and rarely h...
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Line 13, column 446, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'participated'.
Suggestion: participated
...in college, my friends and I had hardly participate in the community program. we focused ma...
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Line 13, column 484, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...y participate in the community program. we focused mainly in the moment of enjoyme...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...rticularly their role in the community. however, todays people are show busy and neglig...
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Line 19, column 383, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y and negligent, they hardly care about this aspects. In conclusion, younger...
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Line 25, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... keep away youth to join these program. however, by providing awareness to realize thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76982611983 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538847117794 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3066456526 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8636363636 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755139435211 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246124733453 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214604300156 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458053018583 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205450733624 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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