Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
nowadays, differences between previous generations and current generations are very obvious so that, these differences result in weak relationships between these two generations, but there are still a lot of people among the newer generation who help and support the people involved in the previous generations. I have several reasons in order to prove my statement, some of which are elaborated in the following:
As the most persuasive reasons, even though some of the young people seem as busy as others think that they have no time to their communities, actually, some of them are working in a project, research, or job that its main goal is an improvement in the life’s quality in the community. Consider a student who works on a project, with the aim of improving the quality of water that is used by the people, therefore, although this student does not help the community directly, he or she will make a sufficient improvement in the quality of peoples' lives.
Second, in the come countries taxes which young people are supposed to pay, will be allotted to the people in their community such as older and incapable persons. in these countries, if the young people population decrease, the taxes and consequently the help to the people in the communities would decrease. as a result, taxes as an assist to the people in the community would be obviously a wonderful issue.
as another reason, there are a huge number of jobs doable mostly by young people that primarily their responsibilities are helping the community such as nursing, medicine jobs, police and such works. as an example, a doctor who treats the patients is helping his or her community in the whole of the day, even the whole of his or her life. so, we should not disregard these noticeable responsibilities in some of the jobs and considerable their assist to their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, second, so, still, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94267515924 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9144564766 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9624907764 48.9658058833 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.444444444 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8888888889 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168551798414 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071578221737 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335601508704 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098295318626 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112170651592 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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