The future of any nation depends mainly on their youth,who will be the leaders of the future. I do not agree with the statement that young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future. I will explain the reasons on which my stance is based on in the below lines.
To begin with, in most society in today's world the young people became increasingly involved in the public life and they have great influence on the course of policies in their countries. The young people represent a high ration of any society and as voters any candidate for the elections would take into consideration to win the hearts and minds of these youth. Moreover, the young generations are so efficient that some of them became leaders and managers at very early age. Therefore, it is unreasonable to claim that young people don't have any influence on the important decisions that are made today. For instance, we had a great revolution in Egypt in 2011, the main leaders were all young people between 20 and 30 years. In addition, the main figure who started the spark of this great revolution is a young activist called Waell Goniem who was nearly 30 years at the time of the revolution. The majority of the people who protest during the days of revolution were young people. Therefore, I believe that the youth role is vital in determining the future and making any decisions.
Second, even older people who hold positions in any state or country, they do think the impact and the consequences of any decision they take on their sons and daughters. They understand that the future is for those young people. Therefore the older people are eager to provide these new generation with the best future, even better than they lived in because usually parents hope that their kids live and experience better life than they had. For example, sometimes you can see these official figures are meeting with the youth to hear about their ideas and prospects for the future.
Admittedly, some old people are reluctant to turn power to young men or women, or even listen to their ideas because they think they are not mature enough to deal with these important issues, however, there is a global trend that are engulfing the world to share the responsibility with young people because they are more able to foresee the future.
In conclusion, I do believe that the young people nowadays are taking part in making the important decisions that could make our world better place for living. Furthermore, the older generations are more willing to share responsibility with the young people more than ever before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...any nation depends mainly on their youth,who will be the leaders of the future. I do...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youth' or 'these youths'?
Suggestion: this youth; these youths
...deration to win the hearts and minds of these youth. Moreover, the young generations are so...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...unreasonable to claim that young people dont have any influence on the important dec...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83111111111 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47619381359 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8225742794 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266448926504 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102822772824 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119361963024 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168691458152 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816891322921 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.