Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The contemporary life is so complex. I agree that planning and organizing your life is crucial. I have two reasons for that belief. I think planning and organizing will lead to enhance your chances to success and obtaining obtain your goals.
To begin with, it is crucial to set draw have a plan for your future, because without will planned steps, failure will always be a possibility. The more planned our future, the higher the chances of our success. We have to draw clear outline and timetable for implementing these steps. For example, when I wanted to travel to work aboard, I searched on all the employment websites sites to know about the requirements that enhances my chances in getting these types of jobs. I talked with some colleagues who work abroad, gathered all data on the work environment as well . After collecting all these information, I drew up a plan in gradual steps to qualify myself to apply for a job abroad in the coming year. I took all the needed courses and studied all the required materials for that type of job. Moreover, I read about the interviews of these jobs and the types of questions often asked. Having done all these gradual steps, I managed to get a job abroad as I had planned.
Secondly, if you want to apply your plan in the most successful way, you have to be fully organized. You have to draw your plan in a logical order, where small steps, one after another, enable you to reach your final goal. For example, as I have mentioned above, when I was planning to travel and work abroad, my steps were set in a natural logical order. I began to set timetable for each small goal or step. Moreover, I had to take into consideration all the possible obstacles that could hinder my progress and put some possible solutions. I followed a certain schedule and steps according to a chronological order. Finally, and because of this organization, I managed to achieve my goal in the right time and overcame all the obstacles that I faced. Therefore, the ability to organize your plans is crucial to our life.
To sum up, the overall success and the ability to draw up plans and organize your life, are essential factors to success, especially in this era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al. I have two reasons for that belief. I think planning and organizing will lead...
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...ess and obtaining obtain your goals. To begin with, it is crucial to set draw...
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Suggestion: plan
...n for your future, because without will planned steps, failure will always be a possibi...
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... to travel to work aboard, I searched on all the employment websites sites to kno...
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...all data on the work environment as well . After collecting all these information,...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ironment as well . After collecting all these information, I drew up a plan in gradual steps to q...
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... plan in gradual steps to qualify myself to apply for a job abroad in the coming ...
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... get a job abroad as I had planned. Secondly, if you want to apply your plan...
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...ul way, you have to be fully organized. You have to draw your plan in a logical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65384615385 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60402269396 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 38.7699295591 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213408590265 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710962907882 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500215144615 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136715427814 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023854349134 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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