Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young children are the major part of society and they directly or indirectly related to the future of society. Their new and innovative ideas can change society. However, a plethora of people contents that young children have no influence on society's important decision. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believe that young children are the most influential for the society. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound subsequent followings.
To commence with, though they are a crucial part of the society, thus they take many important decision for the future. Moreover, some of the decision is really groundbreaking and breaks the rule of traditional society. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I am from a poor country and also from a society where girls decision is neglected by society. Besides, many families do not trust on girls education and marry them at a very young age. But, this was the picture of a decade ago, now time changed and girls know the importance of education which was possible for one woman Begum Rakayia. She first talked about girls education and broke the traditional rules. Thus, young people can make the motivational decision for the future.
Furthermore, they can be a model in also politics, business, science, economics and many different sectors. For example, we all know that Bengali is the international mother language but many people do not know history. It was possible for the young people of our country. When Pakistani declared that urdi will be the only language of Pakistan then young people of Bangladesh did not agree with the decision. They tried to gain their own language as an official language and after a year of huge confliction, Bengali became the language of Pakistan.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that young people are also influential for the future because they can take groundbreaking decision also not afraid of the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...itics, business, science, economics and many different sectors. For example, we all know that ...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le for the young people of our country. When Pakistani declared that urdi will be th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11782477341 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8569455695 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537764350453 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4380563536 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183396415027 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579678462158 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058674183463 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11191128065 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252638871225 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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