Do you agree or disagree？A good leader should admit his bad decisions and accept them.
Leaders are great, when they really make a positive contribution to their society. It is thought by some people that leaders who accept their wrong doings are more successful than those who tend to hide that. This essay will discuss why leaders, in fact, become more successful if they admit their bad decision-making.
First of all, it is important for leaders to be responsible for what they decide to do or the approach that they would follow to solve a problem. Leaders who really have a sense of responsibility to admit their bad decisions, would be able to find a way to do good things. For instance, according to recent research, 89 percent of the people who worked as leaders once in their lives regretted that they did not take their roles as leader seriously. Even though, their responsibility was higher than anybody else, they did not see it in that way. that led them to fail as leaders. Overall, leaders who are responsible for their decisions, would be able to solve problems.
Secondly, admitting a wrong doing is one of the best behaviors that only a good leader would have. Future generations, would always see their leaders as their role models, whom really think outside of the box and embrace the transparency of doing things. For example, the current president of the United State, whom did not accept his wrong doings, would really leave
a negative impact on generations to come. Providing a good example of accepting bad decision making, could increase the respect and the values of the leaders.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how a good leader is when he has a good sense of responsibility to admit his own wrong doings and how the action of thinking outside the box, would make them best leaders. In my opinion, a great leader should accept his bad decision making.
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- TPO. 24-integrated writing task
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... else, they did not see it in that way. that led them to fail as leaders. Overall, l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01286173633 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62855393888 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4828190847 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303024709748 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120487156474 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912203468548 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200521292482 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947100655259 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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