Friends are very important part of our lives. Some people believe that having a friendship with a small number of people is more reliable. While, others argue that it is more important to make many new friends easily. Personally, I think that having a long friendship with a few people is more important.
One of the reasons why I think is more important to have a long lasting relationship is because people have to many people that appear in their life and all of the sudden, these people disappear for one reason or another. If you have friendships that are long lasting than you can trust and rely on them, appreciate that relation even more. Even though some people don't realize that it is very healthy to be socialized and have friends by your side.They still do know that friendship is part of life whether they like it or not. For example, when I was a child I was a friendly kid and had lot of friends but only few were very close to me. Even today, I still have a good relationship with them. We trust, help each other, and appreciate our friendship for all these years. It is such a good feeling. We are proud of ourselves for what we're doing. Because of this I think that having friend that are always by your side is crucial for your life.
The second reason why we should be able to maintain friendship with few people is that the quality of the relationship is better, in the meaning that better have one person that you really trust and rely on, then have 10 people and when you need them you have no one. If we are overspread, you can't keep up in the same way with everyone, it is impossible.That's why, we should have a few friends and try to keep the healthy relationship with them.Thus, it will result in long lasting friendship.
Summing up, I truly believe that a long lasting friendship with a few people is better than the ability to make new friends easily.
Friends are very important part of our lives. Some people believe that having a friendship with a small number of people is more reliable. While, others argue that it is more important to make many new friends easily. Personally, I think that having a long friendship with a few people is more important.
One of the reasons why I think is more important to have a long lasting relationship is because people have to many people that appear in their life and all of the sudden, these people disappear for one reason or another. If you have friendships that are long lasting than you can trust and rely on them, appreciate that relation even more. Even though some people don't realize that it is very healthy to be socialized and have friends by your side.They still do know that friendship is part of life whether they like it or not. For example, when I was a child I was a friendly kid and had lot of friends but only few were very close to me. Even today, I still have a good relationship with them. We trust, help each other, and appreciate our friendship for all these years. It is such a good feeling. We are proud of ourselves for what we're doing. Because of this I think that having friend that are always by your side is crucial for your life.
The second reason why we should be able to maintain friendship with few people is that the quality of the relationship is better, in the meaning that better have one person that you really trust and rely on, then have 10 people and when you need them you have no one. If we are overspread, you can't keep up in the same way with everyone, it is impossible.That's why, we should have a few friends and try to keep the healthy relationship with them.Thus, it will result in long lasting friendship.
Summing up, I truly believe that a long lasting friendship with a few people is better than the ability to make new friends easily.
- The author states the evidence of the cloud seeding which has been effective in protecting crops from hail. As opposed to, the lecturer who counter-argues that viewpoint trying to prove that these three evidence do not seem convincing.First and foremost, 75
- Uniforms Vs non-Uniforms 68
- Tpo 36 3
- Should students wear uniform at school. 60
- TPO 39 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...e believe that having a friendship with a small number of people is more reliable. While, others ...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mall number of people is more reliable. While, others argue that it is more important...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE_SUDDEN[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
...ny people that appear in their life and all of the sudden, these people disappear for one reason ...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tion even more. Even though some people dont realize that it is very healthy to be s...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ocialized and have friends by your side.They still do know that friendship is part o...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... have no one. If we are overspread, you cant keep up in the same way with everyone, ...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...ame way with everyone, it is impossible.Thats why, we should have a few friends and t...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ame way with everyone, it is impossible.Thats why, we should have a few friends and t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...keep the healthy relationship with them.Thus, it will result in long lasting friends...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, i think, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4553314121 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46487841002 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446685878963 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.723533285 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523018842653 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199935419942 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161670119243 0.0737576698707 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.403447619187 0.150856017488 267% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.292748712289 0.0645574589148 453% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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