Do you agree or disagree if people have the opportunity of getting a secure job they should get it right away rather than getting a satisfying job

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...der due to the austerity of the country.I personally believe that it is much bene...
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...an immediate effect, rather than waiting for a self satisfaction job.I feel this ...
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...an waiting for a self satisfaction job.I feel this way for several reasons, whic...
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...eel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs. ...
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...le that are closer to us or peradventure make our plights open to the public.My p...
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...re make our plights open to the public.My personal experience is a compelling exa...
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...experience is a compelling example this.Four years ago, my mother was involved in a ...
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...use if is not done within the period of seventy two hours she might give up the ghost.Fort...
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...e within the period of seventy two hours she might give up the ghost.Fortunately ...
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... two hours she might give up the ghost.Fortunately for me, i got a job with an auditing fi...
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...t give up the ghost.Fortunately for me, i got a job with an auditing firm few mon...
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...ng firm few months before the incidence.At first, i never felt elated because, i h...
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... get a job as an auditor, but because i didnt get response from other like minded com...
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...e from other like minded companies that i submitted my application to so i was ...
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...ompanies that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the ...
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...nies that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job....
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...that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With...
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...i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With this ...
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... my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With this current job...
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...so i was compelled to go with the job.With this current job of mine i did not only...
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...h the job.With this current job of mine i did not only take care of her hospital ...
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... false statement towards her well being.For this reason, it is certainly clear to ...
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...or this reason, it is certainly clear to see why it is much important to grasp a ...
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...is often seen with people that choose to wait for jobs that produce them with sat...
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...obs that produce them with satisfaction.For instance,my cousin who graduated five y...
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...duce them with satisfaction.For instance,my cousin who graduated five years ago sti...
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...five years ago still remains unemployed.So many marketing companies have offered ...
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...ars ago still remains unemployed.So many marketing companies have offered him a ...
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...ny marketing companies have offered him a well paid job, but because he dreams h...
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...s always been with an industrial company so he keeps turning down the offers.With...
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...ny so he keeps turning down the offers.With this, he had encounter a lot difficulti...
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...counter a lot difficulties such that he couldnt afford paying his rent, let alone takin...
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...ifficulties such that he couldnt afford paying his rent, let alone taking care of the ...
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...pting a job offer immediately comes with numerous benefits.This is because it pre...
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...mediately comes with numerous benefits.This is because it prevents us from being em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79404466501 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87138699539 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588089330025 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 20.1344086022 397% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 386.486015271 48.9658058833 789% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.4 100.406767564 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.6 20.6045352989 391% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 5.45110844103 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169099808016 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880729019474 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068129200919 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108949165096 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588205976412 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.4 11.7677419355 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.26 58.1214874552 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 10.1575268817 328% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 10.0537634409 338% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.247311828 332% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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