do you agree or disagree. It is better for children to choose jobs that are simmiler to their parents' job than choose jobs that are very different from their parnents' jobs. Use specific resons and examples to support your answer.
In endeavor for stability and happiness people choose their job carefully. Although some people prefer to choose jobes that their parents have because they are familiar with it, others prefer to choose jobs that are completely different than their parents' jobs. In my opinion, depending on what they like or dislike, people should choose their jobs. Since most of the people spend most of their time at their jobs, people should choose jobs that they are completely fulfill their satisfaction and passionate. Working in a job field or job position that we like increases our creativity and enhance our performance.
Working on subject or at position we like can increase our thought significantly. A study have been conducted in the University Of California indicated that the more passionate the people are to their jobs the more unprecedented idea they create. For example, Stevien Jops, the fiender and the owner of Apple co-operation, was so in love with his work feild. As a result, through out his talents and hard work, he was able to shift his company from unrecognised company to a world class leader in technological developments and computer system.
In addition to creativity, performance enhancements is another aspect that why people should work in jobs they like. Given that people spend up to eight hours every day at their work site, work could be boring. In other word, people might feel exhausted and tired if they dislike their work tasks. In contrast, people who chooses to work in jobs that they like the most, tend to perform far better than those who are not. For instance, sales representatives who are advertise for their products with enthosim and passionate are more likely to achieve their target faster than those who are just advertise for the sake of work tasks.
As a conclusio, we can safely say that even thought that people preform great if they choose to do the same work that their parents used to do, working at something you like augment people performance and creativity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...oose jobs that are completely different than their parents jobs. In my opinion, depe...
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Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fulfilled'.
Suggestion: fulfilled
...ld choose jobs that they are completely fulfill their satisfaction and passionate. Work...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... love with his work feild. As a result, through out his talents and hard work, he was able ...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ot. For instance, sales representatives who are advertise for their products with entho...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advertised'.
Suggestion: advertised
...instance, sales representatives who are advertise for their products with enthosim and pa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252032520325 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.159891598916 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0569105691057 0.0866891130778 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0460704607046 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0921409214092 0.0685040099705 135% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143631436314 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0243902439024 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61986717258 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325203252033 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00271002710027 0.00188951952338 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0542005420054 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189701897019 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216802168022 0.0139019557991 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2023.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98520710059 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334319526627 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233727810651 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147928994083 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109467455621 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61986717258 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.4860208782 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5333333333 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7426434124 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.866666667 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.9061143984 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.40909090909 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400709433013 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141087201555 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101565867723 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540846681417 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171016032439 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162360956985 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108057254619 0.0781384742642 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305568853978 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0253269285961 0.067059652881 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27805773276 0.210909579961 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999821538482 0.0618886996521 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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