There is a friend who lives with their real personality and a friend who lives by following friends’ character. I agree that one can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends this person has. I have two reasons in this essay.
To begin with, you have to be similar with someone in order to be friends. The easiest way to make a friend is to empathize. If your friend likes soccer and you must like to play soccer too. One good example is my experience. When I moved in this place, I met one friend. His personality and my personality were different so after year, we did not not hang out anymore. However, we met again this year. Now we are getting along to each other. Before I met him, I always went to the PC room, but he did not go to the PC room, so I stopped going by myself either.
Secondly, to get rid of each other’s discomfort we have to find same people as we are. If you make a friend, and you do not fit with each other is really uncomfortable. If you do not respect and care for, it will be very inconvenient to hang out with that friend.Thus, in the end you might have an argument worse a big fight because of you do not have the same thoughts.
In conclusion,I am of opinion that it you and your friend have same personality.
Thus, I can say that people can judge us through our friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2265625 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51643765989 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.110282939 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6470588235 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390067643732 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121329937035 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188693121423 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200179908893 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170595299737 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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