Do you agree or disagree? In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make a decision for them. Today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
There are differing opinions on whether young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for the.
Some people think that it has not made differ the rate of dependency young people to their people to make decision for them from the past to contemporary age. For, they believe that young people naturally refer to their parents to give some help for decision making. Ald also they think they like their parents, so they would give some of the help because of this emotional interrelation.
Others, however, argue that today it is a tangible fact that young people are gotten more independent rather than the past.
In my view, I strongly believe that they are fully independent, specifically about decision making, for two compelling reasons.
To begin with, with the expansiveness of science in various areas, the amount of realization of life has been changed. Meanwhile, young people have achieved to thinking independency which made them needless from their parents remarkably. As human being goes forward, its power of analysis of phenomena and natural life is improved. Profound thinking equips young people to be more independent and so they don't need to be dependent on their parents when they encounter specific situations.
A survey in the Research National Institute at the U.S. illustrates that in educated communities, young people are independent emphatically.
Furthermore, in the past people had to live together. So naturally, they were dependent on their parents. But in contemporary life, the type of living has changed drastically. Young people get separated from their families when they are at low ages. So they make decisions solitarily.
For instance, my father was under the impression of his father surprisingly. He tells me he referred to his father like making decision for getting married or who can be a good one for getting married, and in genaral, in every important decision. But I think I should choose my future.
In sum, some may oppose that in the past young people were too much dependent on their parents in comparison today.
Not only has changed science the cognition of life expansively but also has changed the way of living for young people.
Young people should pay attention to their life in this mysterious transient of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, i think, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13262599469 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74283896263 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514588859416 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6836823752 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9545454545 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458563476635 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149689292752 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138080353334 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21001646925 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133324768401 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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