do you agree or disagree that people behavior now have negative affect on future generation comfortable life.
No one can deny that we are living in high stander life nowadays, However, this modern life has a big impact on the future generation, may lead to them to live less comfortable life. Personally, I think future generation will suffer from nowadays misused for our resources and technology. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, people are considered as unfriendly to environment , this is because the deforestation. The industrial revolution make people use almost all their natural resources, like forests wood, natural gases. A good example for this issue. I was reading last week, in the local newspaper.There are a research about the deforestation in Asia. This research shows that there are more than two thousand forests have be cut down in last decade. What is interesting in this research, there are more than three hundred species has been killed in Asia, only because trees cutting. Furthermore, the green houses gases like dioxide carbon has been increased dramatically after cutting these forests. All that has a negative effect on the future life of new generation. If people had taken care of their environment , future generation would have lived more comfortable life.
However, some people claim that future generation will live an easy comfortable lives. This is because the new technology and the advancement that have made by us will help them to live prosperous lives. On the other hand, this new technology and all that inventions, according to new researches, will make from new generation more dependent and will reduce their intellectual. In another word, the new studies state that all the development that has made by us will contribute negatively on new generation life. For example new generation will depend on robots to serve them at their houses, they will not need to go to schools to study. Since they can depend on home schooling or using the internet information. Therefore, extra development may will lead future generation to live worse life not a good life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that our behavior now has a negative effect on future generation comfort lives. This is because people have used almost all global natural resources, and because the high advance technology will make new generation more dependent and less intelligent. If people have but the new generation in their considerations before doing any further step, how that will change the future?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82059387511 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503703703704 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1822110712 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3636363636 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256502969374 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885993383096 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922573922966 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184348312028 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736506465877 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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