Do you agree or disagree :people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in foreign countries
As the development of Economy and method of transportation, more and more people choose to travel during their breaks or holidays. Choosing the destination of the travel becomes a common question for people planning to travel. Someone may argue that traveling in his or her own country benefit them more because they believe that traveling within the border of their homeland will help them to be familiar of their own cultures and traditions. However, in my opinion, traveling abroad will be more beneficial to people, since it allows people to get exposures to other cultures and traveling abroad to an unfamiliar place will give travelers more excitement.
Firstly, travelers can get benefited when traveling abroad, where they get exposure of foreign cultures. As we all know that different countries have different traditions due to their geographical conditions and the significant events happened through their history. For example, Japanese are used to eat raw seafood because they on an island which is close to the ocean; Korean people typically celebrate Christmas instead of New Year because in the past, they closely interacted with western countries.
Furthermore, traveling abroad is beneficial to travels because it brings excitement to them. Staying at the same place all the time can be really boring for people. Even though they travel around their own country, they still meet people with similar language, similar preference for food, and similar traditions. Before I was 14, I got pretty bored at travelling, since whenever my parents brought me to a travel, we would either go to hike in cities around or visit museums about Chinese traditions, such as museums of ancient Chinese artwork and museums telling the history of China. Those museums are similar in China – the artwork looks similar to each other with only variation in color or background; the history I learned from visiting the museums were almost same to what I learned in class. However, my parents brought me to a trip to Japan on my 15th year-old birthday; and that birthday became the birthday I love the most. We went to traditional Japanese restaurants and had fresh seafood there. They bought me a suit of colorful traditional Japanese clothes and I still keep them in my room as treasure. Therefore, as my personal experience has proved, travelling in a country that people do not commonly live in can bring them excitement unparallel to any of their travelling experience in their country.
Admittedly, people may argue that traveling in their home country can help them to get familiar with and remember the history of their country, which is of great benefit to them. However, travelling abroad in other countries can actually grant them the opportunity to learn the interaction of their culture with foreign culture in the history. This world view is critical for people living in 21th century as well.
Therefore, as travelling abroad will help people learn about foreign culture, bring them excitement, and build their view of the world, I believe that people will get more benefitted from travelling in their own country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2632.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68789524512 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3596719673 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.55 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325018236398 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107884801319 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929442454808 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223736797971 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722830516734 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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