do you agree or disagree? people should take a secure job with low income instead of having high paid job with low security.
The question is whether a person should take a secure job with low income or vice versa. Since the occupations affect human's life from several dimensions; hence, everyone with regard to the condition of his private life and abilities can make a logical decision about the selection of job. In a controversial debate, some believed that a high paid job helps them to save much money for their future even if that job is not certain; however, others claimed the secure low paid jobs provide a great number of merits. Personally, I am unanimous with the latter group. The following paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through three noticeable reasons:
To begin with, it goes without saying that nowadays world is wrestling with economic crisis. Human beings work for a long time to pay their rents, university's tuitions, bills and the cost of meal and transportation and list goes on. Unfortunately, in such a frustrating circumstance, people at least should attempt to maintain their spirit high. With having a secure task although low-paid, the senses such as stress or anxiety will not overcome human's life. Meanwhile, eliminating extra and unnecessary costs and having an adequate management will assist the young to compensate their low income.
The second reason for my argument lies the fact that in a comparison with the past, the number of graduations have increased in recent years; therefore, a tremendous surge of youths are looking for the occupations. One should notice that finding a secure work is very formidable. Since often the high paid-jobs are not usually permanently, so a person may earn much money in a short time but at the end, he will join to unemployed people. Needless to say that rate of depression or suicide thoughts will increase because of unemployment situation.
Moreover, I tend to empower my reasons with following discussion. As I mentioned above, having a secure job can provide peaceful beds among workers. If employees are not really satisfied with their income, simply they can find other part-time jobs inside their main job. This will also cause workers broaden scope of their experiences in a wide range of fields.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that accepting a secure job - even though its income is very low - will lead people to pay the costs of their life on time without any worry toward future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, while, at least, such as, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69658865307 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8470628061 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37281260609 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113963682982 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09633307742 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203389933423 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815892029714 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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