Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good?
Progress,is one of the things which makes us noticeable and distinctive in big world. Personally, there are more positive than negative aspects when I think about progress. Firstly it is in our genes to have a progress and secondly its good to have award after achieve some target that it was in your dreams before.
To begin with, I am writing this essay on this computer because of the progress. Actually, everything around us is because our develop . We are the most intelligent creatures on this planet and we owe everything to achievement of new things . Constantly . But this is in our DNA. We are born – and we learn how to walk ,talk go to study, work . Searching for better opportunities . I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. I have always wanted to achieve new goals in my life , so far. Progress gives us so many things –today we have lived the longest lives in this world because of medicine achievments .
Likewise, it is good to award yourself when you achieve your goals. And that’s why progress is even sweeter. From my point of view it is good to have some small awards after every time you achieve something you wish for. I could give an example – in every persons life after graduating from high school, normally there has a celebration that it is called prom.It is celebrated because the student is reached some point of his educational life and he is now prepared for job or going to study more for higher education.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons,I believe progress is always good.Firstly, we all have the privillage to live in the world who Is made of progress and secondly an award for this is always a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66993464052 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64770081219 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7029869684 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186003900998 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573868077479 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681869248024 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140600424524 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735343991411 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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