Progress is a complex concept and should be defined completely in all fields. There are many positive and negative views about the progress, most people believe that progress is always good and a few says progression is not good in all time. I explain in following reasons that advancement is always good :
First of all, american people have a famous quote that says new is better and this makes them be in progressive trend always. This means human being in every situation must think about advancing which led societies to improve quality of everything. Optimization is a common issue in science that try to find out how a phenomenon could be better and better. In fact this belief claims there is not a limit for improvement and an individual should not be pleased with good when he can reach great instead. For example engineers do not consent with a machine with eighty percent efficiency and they work on it because they believe it could be more efficient and this causes a optimizing cycle for better device.
Secondly, being better always resulted welfare for worldwide. If progression had been stopped we now do not have many inventions and utilities. The philosophy about continuous improvement is a proof for creation in industries which this changes our life easier and more convenient in comparison with previous centuries. For example when automobile had been invented for proper travelling it would be stopped if there is not a belief about nonstop progressing. However after that ships and airplanes have been created to make our trips better and better.
Finally, being always in progress make our communities alive and go to forward. If there is not a coercion about being advanced we will have a idle atmosphere in our countries and families which tend to be static without any movement to future. In other words future will be a nonsense meaning because everything has been stopped. For example a undergraduate student do not pay attention to graduate programs since he think this level of education is enough.
In conclusion, improvement is a flow which will not ceased with any factor while persons foreseen great after good in any circumstance and condition and our universe has been based on this doctrine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...could be more efficient and this causes a optimizing cycle for better device. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...not a belief about nonstop progressing. However after that ships and airplanes have bee...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...verything has been stopped. For example a undergraduate student do not pay attent...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...attention to graduate programs since he think this level of education is enough. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99732620321 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70244794379 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540106951872 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.531539698 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.941176471 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126368518451 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479183081367 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528424352958 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861419562026 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733834244301 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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