Do you agree or disagree? Rather than help children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children to do their work independently.
There is no doubt that nowadays, independence plays the key role in people’s lives. No one can deny the effects of independence on our private lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is the children to do their work independently or not. Some people may hold this viewpoint that it is better parents should encourage their children to do their work independently. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that help children with their schoolwork. From my own perspective, the first belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that when children do homeworking without help their parents that are could increase solve problems ability in future. That is important for children because they face to different problems. An empirical study in the Asia shows that everyone who carries out their duties independently, they solve their problems better than who doing their problems with help parents. This clarifies the fact that the independence creates person’s personality. Moreover, independence increases self-confidence and that is a reason to succeed.
Another equally important reason is that from a psychological standpoint, when people carry out their work dependence and with help family members, they will not be mature. In this situation, people will not be able to decide on important life issues properly. In fact, the community needs independent and capable people to advance their goal. Moreover, education of independence children starts of family. Furthermore, families with independent children have higher mental health.
The last but not the least reason is that children who carry out their works without the help of their families will have a better understanding of life’s problems and the problems of society. For example, when I was a graduate student in Tehran who was working duration of training (studying). My work is not only self-confidence for me but also income for my expense. Then a person who independent in life is more flexible. This means that children who carry out their works without the help of their parents will have more flexible corresponding problems.
To wrap it up, it is my deep belief that parents encourage their children to do their work independently. It is obvious that independent can increase self-confidence in children also they solve problems better. All in all, it is anticipated that in future children become more independent in the families rather than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29756097561 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00588358215 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468292682927 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.48771961 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.88 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453843841494 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131166519677 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148491119609 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294247299811 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809765023435 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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