Do you agree or disagree with this statement ,most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are use specific reason and example to support your idea?

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In todays industrial world every special commodity is manufactured...
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In todays industrial world every special commodity is manufactured by ple...
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...y is manufactured by plenty of factories , because of that there is a close conte...
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... is a close contest between producers to recognize their good as the most previli...
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...ze their good as the most previliged one and to gain peoples good will about it ...
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...eir good as the most previliged one and to gain peoples good will about it . Com...
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... and to gain peoples good will about it . Commercial advertisements which are de...
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...ill about it . Commercial advertisements which are depicted at social media is a...
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...rcial advertisements which are depicted at social media is a furtune for them t...
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...d at social media is a furtune for them to introduce their product and to occup...
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...for them to introduce their product and to occupy market , for this reason , t...
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...duce their product and to occupy market , for this reason , they attempt to sho...
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...uce their product and to occupy market , for this reason , they attempt to show...
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...and to occupy market , for this reason , they attempt to show a faultless pict...
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...d to occupy market , for this reason , they attempt to show a faultless pictur...
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...or this reason , they attempt to show a faultless picture of their own product a...
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...ultless picture of their own product and , consequently I agree with this stateme...
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... of their own product and , consequently I agree with this statement that most th...
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...ertisements are far distant from reality , wherease others may hold an opposite ...
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...tisements are far distant from reality , wherease others may hold an opposite opi...
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...ease others may hold an opposite opinion . in the following paragraph I will imply...
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...e others may hold an opposite opinion . in the following paragraph I will imply to...
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...paragraph I will imply to some prevalent techniques which are applied by announce...
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...nnouncements makers in order to advocate my above point of view . advertisment...
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...rder to advocate my above point of view . advertisments commonly use of comp...
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...o advocate my above point of view . advertisments commonly use of computer special eff...
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... view . advertisments commonly use of computer special effect. These effects ...
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...ments commonly use of computer special effect. These effects could be include...
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... computer special effect. These effects could be included of fasinating color c...
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...special effect. These effects could be included of fasinating color composition...
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...ncluded of fasinating color compositions , human supernatural power , an so on . F...
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... compositions , human supernatural power , an so on . For example , I was watching...
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...ernatural power , an so on . For example , I was watching an advertisement about l...
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... was watching an advertisement about lcd ,it displayed a man sitting on a couch ...
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...about lcd ,it displayed a man sitting on a couch and watching an amazing nature ...
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... ,it displayed a man sitting on a couch and watching an amazing nature ,the colo...
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... a couch and watching an amazing nature ,the colors were explicit enough that ...
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...amazing nature ,the colors were explicit enough that he felt calm and immagined...
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...ature ,the colors were explicit enough that he felt calm and immagined himsel...
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...explicit enough that he felt calm and immagined himself sorrounded by geen tr...
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...enough that he felt calm and immagined himself sorrounded by geen trees and sin...
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...orrounded by geen trees and sining birds , this advertisment attemted to express ...
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...rrounded by geen trees and sining birds , this advertisment attemted to express h...
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...nt attemted to express how much this lcd amplify colors transparence by all of u...
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...ed to express how much this lcd amplify colors transparence by all of us know th...
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...sparence by all of us know this is just an computer trick , or advertisments abou...
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...f us know this is just an computer trick , or advertisments about energy drinks ,...
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... , or advertisments about energy drinks , person obtain an extraordinary power af...
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...an extraordinary power after usage of it , they even can fly or do their works wi...
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...it , they even can fly or do their works with no exhaustion and uninterrepted but...
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... and uninterrepted but visual effectsare not the only deception of commercials ...
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...pted but visual effectsare not the only deception of commercials trade ,sometim...
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...sual effectsare not the only deception of commercials trade ,sometimes they ev...
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...he only deception of commercials trade ,sometimes they ever are claimant, that ...
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...on of commercials trade ,sometimes they ever are claimant, that special product ...
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...mant, that special product can effect on human connections . Second, sometime...
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...product can effect on human connections . Second, sometimes advertisements al...
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...r products bring people more joyful life , for examole they monitore exultant fam...
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...e exultant families gathering toghether or lovers who have no disagreement or an...
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...e no disagreement or an alone person who finally be success in making friends , ...
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... alone person who finally be success in making friends , and all of them have ha...
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...o finally be success in making friends , and all of them have happened after bu...
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...ds , and all of them have happened after buying that product . For example they d...
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...have happened after buying that product . For example they display a mother whose...
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...nt kind of rice and bring family arround the dinner table . Its obvious that no r...
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...d bring family arround the dinner table . Its obvious that no relation is depende...
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...dependent on just one commercial product ,but this advertisement almost persude vi...
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...rsude viewers to use from that good. finally , I put in proposal , if factoriess man...
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...iewers to use from that good. finally , I put in proposal , if factoriess manag...
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...hat good. finally , I put in proposal , if factoriess manager want to dont face...
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...t to dont face with bankruptcy and also dont lose their stocks and reliability , the...
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...o dont lose their stocks and reliability , they should avoid from making much exag...
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...aking much exaggrative advertisemnts and enhance modality of their products inste...
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...ty of their products instead of expendig money for them , only an simple announc...
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...cts instead of expendig money for them , only an simple announcement is enough f...
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...ead of expendig money for them , only an simple announcement is enough for prese...
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...is enough for presenting their commodity .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, may, second, so, whereas, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2757793765 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96988435745 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621103117506 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.4480474 48.9658058833 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.0 100.406767564 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.7 20.6045352989 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 85.0 5.5376344086 1535% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213895513267 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789174620768 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568598679148 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124039045525 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270314348212 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 11.7677419355 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 58.1214874552 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.1575268817 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.