It is obvious that there are different factors in determining humans’ character and personality. I strongly believe that appearance and clothes which people wear cannot be considered a symbol of their character because their dresses and clothes depends on various elements such as financial conditions, traditions and rules of a country, and so on. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think it is not reasonable to judge individuals’ character by their outfits and clothing because of the fact that they choose to wear their clothes base on their financial conditions. As a result, we are not able to evaluate their character by looking at their appearance. For instance, one of my friends always costs a great deal of money to purchase their clothes. When others observe her, they imagine that she is a respectful person because of her high-priced dresses, while after communicating with her, their mind about her would change. As a result, there is more crucial factor to determine people’s personality than the type of clothing including their behavioral traits.
Moreover, I believe that another element which affects human’s choice is the rules that are governed in countries. People are forced to obey the laws and customs of their society; otherwise, they will commit an illegal action. For example, in my county, Iran, persons have to follow the rules and wear hijab even if they do not like to put on it.
Finally, people dress various clothes in different positions and locations. When they take part in special meeting, they wear formal clothing; in contrast, they wear casual clothes while they go to park and go shopping, etc. Also, employees in a company wear uniform outfits owing to the rules of the company. Accordingly, everyone’s appearance does not reveal their personality
To sum up, in my point of view, the most important factor in specifying human being’s personality is their morality and behavioral attributes. Their appearance and style of wearing clothes cannot be regarded decisive factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...character by their outfits and clothing because of the fact that they choose to wear their clothes base ...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arance does not reveal their personality To sum up, in my point of view, the most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25222551929 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93060622309 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2232547271 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118161106067 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432968158419 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421302828484 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681456070913 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284780463302 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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