Do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character?
What to dress today is a daily issue people meet everyday and clothes always have a place in the fashion field no matter how the times change. Recently, an interesting question related to clothes and personality arises. Whether people’s clothes reveal their personality or not? Facing to this question, it is highly possible that people hold different views. Although many people may believe that the way people dresses is a good indication of their character, from my perspective, I cannot disagree with this statement more.
First of all, a great many people dress similar in particular environments but they have different personalities. As we all know, students in most high schools and workers in some companies are required to wear uniforms during their routine study and work time. There is no difference in their dressing but we cannot say that there is no distinction in their characters as well. For instance, my sister Amy, who is a normal high school student always wears uniform in the school as well as others. She and her best friend Emma often study together and stay together. They wear school uniforms like twins but they definitely have different characters. My sister is quiet while Emma is active, and my sister likes classic music while Emma likes popular music. Also, sometimes they buy and wear similar clothes as sister wearing out of the school. Obviously, in those cases, having similar clothes does not mean having similar personality.
What’s more, a person dresses variously in different places and situations. In fact, the way that an individual dresses is not unchangeable. Does it mean his or her personality is ever-changing? I believe no! Take myself for example, whenever I go out with my co-workers, I try to dress a little formal. In contrast, whenever I stay with my friends, I wear causal clothes. Besides, the way I dress depends on not only people with whom I would be, but also different locations or activities. As an instance, I would never wear formal clothes when I want to go rock climbing. In a word, an individual dresses variously in different situations which makes revealing its personality absolutely impossible.
Based on statements above, I firmly disagree with the statement that the way an individual dresses indicates his or her personality because in many situations people wear uniforms or similar clothes yet they have different characters. Besides, the dress style of people keeps changing due to their certain reasons such as different people they would meet or different activities they would take part in. Instead of paying attention to the way a person dresses to know his or her personality, I would highly recommend keep an eye on their behavior which might be more efficient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ress today is a daily issue people meet everyday and clothes always have a place in the ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79946516189 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503296703297 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5622555793 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254900729056 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775949424925 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077357438137 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182860653747 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839190475189 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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