Do you agree or disagree?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.
life virtually has been hard for everyone .No matter when or in which century we are living. people always have difficulties and issues to come up with and those issues may be different in different times but they are still issues. As we know technology had an enormous impression in our lives and helps us in different situations even in those that are very simple .As a result, I agree that life today is easier than past because our grandparents didn’t have this technology that we have so they should handle problems and difficulties that we are doing easily today without even thinking that how we are doing them. Now I’m going to explain my idea by bringing some reasons and examples.
First of all , in past people even didn’t had a washing machine to wash and dry their clothes so they had to wash their clothes with their hands and after that try to make it dry however, we do it easily by putting them in washing machine and the machine do it all for us.
Secondly, in today life smart phones has an important role which in past people didn’t have even a simple phone so they can make their calls or easily send their messages and if they want to say something to their families or friend they had to go meet them and say it in person. however, we almost do everything with these phones not just calling or texting for instance we do shopping, taking a cap, etc.
Thirdly, we can point out to transportation service that we have variety of them. For example these days if people want to go on a travel they can choose easily between bus, train or an airplane considering their interests but, In past people should travel with their horses which was so hard and took a lots of time to reach the destination .Moreover, they could risk their lives during these travels because of many reasons like being attacked by animals or sudden climate changes.
To sum up, due to those reason that I explained above believe that today life is much easier than it was before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56824512535 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38503565209 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518105849582 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.008196446 48.9658058833 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.0 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.9 20.6045352989 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 5.45110844103 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116016604045 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565698645726 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544078997251 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830277412155 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629283878811 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.