Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
these days technology is progressing in an accelerate way and we know that it’s been helpful for us in our lives because we do many things with it even our common and easy stuff as a result, i agree with this statement and I believe not only children also adults are going to be less creative because every single problem that we face in our lives simply we are going to google it and find the answer easily. however, in the past people had to face this problems by their own and find the way to solve them which was not so easy because they had to think a lot and spend a lots of time on them to find a right and helpful way thus, they had to use their brain more often and became creative . now I’m going to make some examples in order to make my statement clear.
First of all, we can mention the time that young students like second or third grades who wants to learn new lesson like multiple table. In past students had to find and create many ways like making songs or some other ways like playing with numbers in order to learn this multiple table. however ,these days students are going to google it and find thousands ways. i have a cousin who is nine years old they have given an assignment in school to create a new war for learning these multiple choices and she started easily searching that in internet and found thousands of them besides she found some applications too which made it completely easy for students without thinking and bothering themselves.
Secondly, in past when children got bored they were going to play with their friends and as plays got so boring and tedious another game had to be create to make them satisfy and happy so, they tried to be creative and invent new things in order to have new games to play. but, as we know all of the children’s today are playing with their cellphones or on PS because they have lots of prepared games to be played. For example, I have a young brother who is playing with his phone whether watching movie all the time. besides, I think these kind of games that children were playing in the past was so efficient for their health too because many of them contained activity so, they somehow did some exercise too during the game. however, today children are just sitting somewhere all the time and play without any activity.
Thirdly, we can point out to university students who should be creative and try to learn things in efficient way to not be forgotten but they are just subscribing some channels in YouTube to learn them easily without solving challenging problems. when students try to solve the problems by their own it helps them not to forget it easily.
In general, I think that maybe technology would had some good effects too like searching wide sources in order to complete our projects or researches but only getting some help from that would be fine. however, Now days people find everything completely solved in internet which is harmful and ruined the creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, i think, in general, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56529850746 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30619144498 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442164179104 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2582693721 48.9658058833 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.9375 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143775665125 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449321485069 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390584711111 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716034407764 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568077979437 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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