Do you agree or not in this statement? traveling with a guide is the best way to travel.
People find amusing when they visited a new place for refreshment either alone or help of guidance. In my opinion, travelling with guide is beneficial for many aspects. In the following paragraph, I am going to elucidate my point vividly.
First of all, tourist guide make sure us to visit a special places of that area. They know about all the area which is famous for what things; While it is more risk of missing the important places in independent travel. For instance, when my family and I were traveling first time at pokhara, we were oblivion about the places. We were so confused to start from which destination and where we should reach out. However, we hired the guide for two days and within that time, we visited all the famous places in pokhara like bindabasini temple, phewa lake , stupa and sarankot-famous for paragliding. Had we travel by ourselves at that time, we definitely would miss the important places.
Secondly, visiting with guide is safe and convenient in traveling a strange place.
People may not know about the dangerous places in new environment and have no idea for locating budget as their caliber. In this vary condition, guide is insanely helpful. While I was travelling in india, totally different places for me, totally nervous and confused. Then, my friend and I chosed a travel package for the southern india with guide service. Because of good guidance, I felt a hell of confident and safe.Later I knew about the india from the other traveller they got mugged as they traveling alone in india with no specific plant and advice. Hearing this knews forced me to contemplate my time in india that I might get mugged if my guide did not have warned me about the location and their potential risk.
In conclusion, having guide of our side when travelling is very worthy. They can make our journey memorable and easy because of their suggestion and service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83435582822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58713788934 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8581179506 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21316825491 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856485719844 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078428817868 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14528238731 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571137570966 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.