do you enjoy eating out on in home?
Lila, the fat friends of mine, always states that, hey eating is the most important thing in life. Although I didn’t enjoy the attitude behind this belief if you look closer you will absolutely find it is not that much wrong. People work about nearly eight hours a day to get home take coffee and enjoy having a bar of chocolate, slices of pizzas, hot delicious pasta and … .
Sometimes I like eating out, but most of the times I enjoy eating home. And my reason is my little cat Miky. He cannot bear being alone for more than five hours. However, some when I put him in his carrier bag and go to the nearest park. Then our picnic begins he can enjoy the fresh weather, shining sun, and little birds. Of course, I don’t let him hunt them but he can watch them. Sandwich and hamburgers are the most common dinner and sometimes jam, ice cream, and strawberry cakes as a dessert.
There is another reason which makes me stay and eat at home more often and that is money issues. Provided that I am going to buy a Telescope to enjoy the vast cosmic oceans. I have to save money each month and eating home is much more affordable. Although my mother enjoys eating out late, going to cinema after it and jogging in the park after the dinner, my father always loves to eat at home, watching the news in TV and checking out the latest news on websites, he is a true update politician.
Thus, there are different viewpoint according to human situation and these opinion changes during the lifetime. Most of the times life difficulties, responsibilities and either season force you to change your interests. For example, when I was younger I hate, really hate eating out when everyone stares at me. Or to illustrate seasons impact, it is always easier for me to eat out at summer instead of winter.
As a conclusion, interests depends on various situations. But right now I most enjoy eating indoor with my little cat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es of pizzas, hot delicious pasta and … . Sometimes I like eating out, but most...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[8]
Message: “Provided that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me more often and that is money issues. Provided that I am going to buy a Telescope to enjoy ...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'viewpoints'?
Suggestion: viewpoints
... politician. Thus, there are different viewpoint according to human situation and these ...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...hanges during the lifetime. Most of the times life difficulties, responsibilities and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, then, thus, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54178674352 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39671021279 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619596541787 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8515328612 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37032157982 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951851885908 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108714118928 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189081408813 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064262052031 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.