Why are people living longer?
With the increasing speed of technology, health services, and science, it is not peculiar that people tend to live longer. The average life per capita was shifted gradually from 50 years to 80 years for women and 45 years to 75 years for men, in the last two decades. Although, growing trend of wars, accidents, water scarcity issues are still glowing, but, it seems that these effects are not as drastic as health services grow.
In about twenty years ago, kids death due to different infectious diseases like, Cholera, Tuberculosis, infantile paralysis, and Diphtheria was common. About fourteen percent of each family children died during their infant ages while other ten percent dies after childhood ages due to aforementioned diseases. The vaccination invention by Robert Koch, was a medicine revelotion that saves many lives.
Gradually, medicine doctors and scientists started to investigated the diseases origins by the aim of microscope and experiences on mices, which their body are very similar to humans immune system. As far as I am concerned people tend to live longer for various reasons listed as follows.
First and the most, While drugs helps you to recover your pain, aches, expelling out the venomous and toxic chemicals out of your body, a good diet comprise all vitamins, iron, and proteins is another effective factor.
Second, drug improvements, conjugation the traditional drug system with the last chemical drugs invented and discovered by drug and biotech scientists, new concealed paths of health is revealed. For instance, now it is very easy to cure seasonal allergies with small tablets and capsules.
On the other hand, with the aim of nano-technology and computer sciences it is no available for medicine engineers to help doctors locate the benign and malignant tomures by tomographic images and signal processing. On the other hand these engineers can invent specific instrument for surgeries. Now, it is also very easy for doctors to do a surgery virtually using internet from other side of the world.
In short, I think in out century people are living longer despite the older times but we have to be careful of the climate, wars, and new incoming and unknown diseases which will be revealed with our own hand due to careless manner, nervous behavior and ambition. For example, HIV was created with our own hands, don’t you believe? What about malnutrition in africa?
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- Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response.Your response will be judged onn the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typic 70
- are parents good teachers? 3
- Important qualities of a good supervisor 76
- why people go to museums? 76
- Should a new restaurant be built in your neighborhood? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ergies with small tablets and capsules. On the other hand, with the aim of nano-...
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Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...-technology and computer sciences it is no available for medicine engineers to hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15776081425 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.693001676 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620865139949 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4095022201 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.235294118 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121135471159 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442938559493 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992013693586 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591678488969 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702997540997 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.