Education is a paramount concern for any parent. Education is an important thing to get a good and perfect future career. whether educating children is amore difficult duty than in the past or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. some believe that education in these days is easier than before many decade. Other have an opposite thought. Admittedly, some individual think, now a days there are many things that may distract kids studying like using cell phone or playing games. In my opinion, if these devices are used correctly and under parent watch: educating kids become easier by using these technology. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view. why I feel in this way.
First, the important reason come to my mind is: these devices are very helpful in teaching process. This is due to the fact that, we can use them easily to get any information or knowledge we want. internet it accessible way for studying. You can imagine, just grab your computer or I pad and get any information you want without distract yourself in searching in a lot of books. For instance, when I was in high school, I went to library to prepare topic for my projects or assignments. In contrast, my daughter can uses her phone and reads a lot of articles and E books then grabs any information she needs. From my example you can figure out advantages of these tools in facilitate our education process.
Second reason springs to me, playing games activate our brain and cause mental development. In addition, these games will help children to get many skills and experience. Furthermore, social networking is consider as entertainment method. Student want vent to release their stress from long school week days to refresh their mindv and return back to their academic classes with positive energy.
In conclusion, I believe educating kids are easy with the presence of smart tools like phones and online games. this is due to expositions that mention above.
Education is a paramount concern for any parent. Education is an important thing to get a good and perfect future career. whether educating children is amore difficult duty than in the past or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. some belive that education in these days is easier than before many decade. Other have an opposite thought. Admittedly, some indivitual think, now a days there are many things that may distract kids studying like using cell phone or playing games. In my opinion, if these devices are used correctly and under parent watch: educating kids become easier by using these technology. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view. why I feel in this way.
First, the important reason come to my mind is: these devices are very helpful in teaching process. This is due to the fact that, we can use them easily to get any information or knowledge we want. internet it accessible way for studying. You can imagine, just grab your computer or I pad and get any information you want without distract yourself in searching in a lot of books. For instance, when I was in high school, I went to library to prepare topic for my projects or assignments. In contrast, my daughter can uses her phone and reads a lot of articles and E books then grabs any information she needs. From my example you can figure out advantages of these tools in facilitate our education process.
Second reason springs to me, playing games activate our brain and cause mental development. In addition, these games will help children to get many skills and experience. Furthermore, social networking is consider as entertainment method. Student want vent to release their stress from long school week days to refresh their mind and return back to their academic classes with positive energy.
In conclusion, I believe educating kids are easy with the presence of smart tools like phones and online games. this is due to expositions that mention above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83040935673 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60455257734 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599415204678 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4307873705 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8260869565 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8695652174 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385378215617 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111482801606 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137113484873 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196604670603 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18606927234 0.0645574589148 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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