Education plays a vital role in the development of a country or a society. If the high school will be built in my community I will definitely welcome it. I have many reasons to support it but I will describe a few.
First of all, because of "convenient and affordability" of the students, know many students in my area, who have to travel very far to attend high school. Some of them go by bus and the bus service is very costly. Various family can bear teh cost, but there are a few who can not. If a high school will be in society, it will be very money-saving plan. Beside this, it will make more convenient for the students who get exhausted by traveling so far. For example, one or my neighbour's son was feeling very tired and stressed, after traveling one hour from school. I talked to him, he wanted to give up for the same reason. Hence, a new high school will a new hope for them. Everyone will be very pleased and happy to hear this.
Furthermore, It will promote girl education in my community. In India there are many villages, which doent has high school and I know many parents, who somehow send their boys to attend high school but they feel unsecured to send their daughters to high school. They believe that sending daughetrs to such a far place is not a good culture. Hence if my community have higher school service it will be beneficial for the girls, who wanted to study but can't do it just because of the unavailability of school. I personally believe that Girls education is very crucial for society's development. If they will not study enough then how will they teach their kids. A well education mother can raise a well-educated child. one of famous person Nepolean Bonapart has been said that" give me a good mother I will give you good nation". So girls education is very co-related to the country's progress. Therefore I will strongly support the high school plan.
In conclusion, I feel that "students convenience" and girls education promotion are important factors to be considered for the success of a country in any field. So I will really welcome the idea about high school building plan for the sake of my country's development.
Education plays a vital role in the development of a country or a society. If the high school will be built in my community I will definitely welcome it. I have many reasons to support it but I will describe a few.
First of all, because of "convenient and affordability" of the students, know many students in my area, who have to travel very far to attend high school. Some of them go by bus and the bus service is very costly. Various family can bear teh cost, but there are a few who can not. If a high school will be in society, it will be very money-saving plan. Beside this, it will make more convenient for the students who get exhausted by traveling so far. For example, one or my neighbour's son was feeling very tired and stressed, after traveling one hour from school. I talked to him, he wanted to give up for the same reason. Hence, a new high school will a new hope for them. Everyone will be very pleased and happy to hear this.
Furthermore, It will promote girl education in my community. In India there are many villages, which doent has high school and I know many parents, who somehow send their boys to attend high school but they feel unsecured to send their daughters to high school. They believe that sending daughetrs to such a far place is not a good culture. Hence if my community have higher school service it will be beneficial for the girls, who wanted to study but can't do it just because of the unavailability of school. I personally believe that Girls education is very crucial for society's development. If they will not study enough then how will they teach their kids. A well education mother can raise a well-educated child. one of famous person Nepolean Bonapart has been said that" give me a good mother I will give you good nation". So girls education is very co-related to the country's progress. Therefore I will strongly support the high school plan.
In conclusion, I feel that "students convenience" and girls education promotion are important factors to be considered for the success of a country in any field. So I will really welcome the idea about high school building plan for the sake of my country's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68894601542 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8478789098 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491002570694 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8232600023 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48877348795 0.236089414692 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154733909234 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143612567056 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400811159837 0.150856017488 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.274325248644 0.0645574589148 425% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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