Essay topics: take a secure job or wait for a satisfactory job
Undoubtedly, job is important part of our life and earn of good job is people's desire. Although waiting for a satisfying job seem more beneficial, getting secure job has numerous advantages for people.
In modern life, which population are rising and demands are increased, job is a vital factor for life. Life equipment is not free for people, and people must work for making money and supply their necessities. They cannot wait for a job that they think that would be more satisfying they have to pay for their requirements. There is no doubt that if people have the opportunity to get a secure job that would be more logical to take the job. The person who graduated from university and wants to live independently needs a job. He cannot wait for long time to get a satisfying job. He can take a secure job, the job help him to makes money and also gets new experiences and good resume and when he has the opportunity to get a satisfying job he can take this job.
In addition, working in the job that people think this is not satisfying after while become more enjoyable and valuable for them. Unemployment is worth than everything in human life so working and attempt to be better employee makes life more satisfying. When we take new job we learn about methods and manners and even about jobs goals, these elements bring people to satisfy their job. Also, in the job persons can find new friends and they can share their idea and this make job more satisfying for them.
Believe to success and progress is more important than taking the satisfying job, there are a lot of persons that they have good job but they are not successful. We can be successful in our job and make that more satisfying job if we attempt to improvement our ability and use our knowledge. I never think about secure job before but when my friend got a simple job in the company of food product, he did not like his job because he was graduated from health school and he had to work as worker but after while he knew the company condition and goals and he attempted to understand company's problems .He propose ideas about food safety and healthy food. Company owner accepted this ideas and the sale of product increased and company owner decided to offer him health Consultant Company.
In conclusion, although we are not able to wait to take satisfying job, we can take a secure job and attempt to success and progress this lead us to feel pleasure and satisfy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rking in the job that people think this is not satisfying after while become more enjoyable and v...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: WORTH_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse', the comparative of 'bad'?
Suggestion: worse
... and valuable for them. Unemployment is worth than everything in human life so workin...
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Line 7, column 600, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ttempted to understand companys problems .He propose ideas about food safety and h...
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Line 7, column 602, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...empted to understand companys problems .He propose ideas about food safety and hea...
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Line 7, column 605, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'proposes'.
Suggestion: proposes
...ted to understand companys problems .He propose ideas about food safety and healthy foo...
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Line 7, column 678, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd healthy food. Company owner accepted this ideas and the sale of product increased...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s lead us to feel pleasure and satisfy.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258474576271 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.180084745763 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677966101695 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0423728813559 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0783898305085 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101694915254 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0296610169492 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47193450539 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381355932203 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0656779661017 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233050847458 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127118644068 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2455.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59225512528 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268792710706 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200455580866 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127562642369 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0933940774487 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47193450539 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441913439636 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.3118190047 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3888888889 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8348806176 48.84282405 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.388888889 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3888888889 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 44.4344469754 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.29577464789 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273196623971 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140644354675 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816573980306 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564810964044 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152203679661 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137092854608 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759659292152 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434781537491 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0634118498485 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217351162323 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700050626792 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.