Essay topics: TPO-16 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travel and going to natural and historical sites is an exciting entertainment that absorbs most of the people. Personally I prefer to travel in a group with an expert leader. I have several reasons that all are based on my own experiences. I explain two important reasons.
First of all, most of the people are not familiar with their destiny and it is their first time that they want to visit there. So, I think being in a group that led by a tour guide can improve the qualifity of our travel. By having an skilled person in a group that he knows all the places we can visit most of the places without spending too many time. Also, in most of the tours, the leader know the history of the plasec and states it to the visitors and it is exciting.
Also, going to many places such as jungles, lakes, mountains is not always safe and simple. To go to these places we need to know about the safe roads, the best time for starting the journey, the best places for camping, the places of shelters. By having a leader in our journey we can have a safe journey. We can use experiences of the leader and avoid from dangerous conditions. Leaders have guidlines they states these guidlines and by following these rules we can prepare ourselves. In environment there are many wild animal that we do not face with them, but if this situation accure. leaders will control the situation better than ordinary people. I think for avoiding these kind of accidents having a leader in a group is vital. I have a memory from my childhood. When I was a kid, myfamily with other people started a journey among the forests. One night we have to spend the night i n an old house between the jungle. Unfortunatley my family and most of the people in our group did not aware af the dangerous bears that lived in that jungle. I remembered a terrible shriek of my friend. She had faced with a big bear out of the house. I remember that one of the people in our grop said to the dughter that "be calm, and do not move". After a while the bear changed his direct and got awayfrom the doughter. That was a terrible situation that could became a disaster. But that man saved the girl just because he knows about the bears and their habits. This is one of the advatages of the experts people. They can save lives in bad situations.
In a nutshell, I prefer to travel in a group with an expert guy in a group. Leaders are experienced people. We can rely on them for having a good journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... the qualifity of our travel. By having an skilled person in a group that he knows...
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Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...most of the places without spending too many time. Also, in most of the tours, the leader...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...conditions. Leaders have guidlines they states these guidlines and by following these ...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leaders
...ith them, but if this situation accure. leaders will control the situation better than ...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...n ordinary people. I think for avoiding these kind of accidents having a leader in a group...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have a memory from my childhood. When I was a kid, myfamily with other people st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, i think, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36739130435 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40526655142 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463043478261 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6807369657 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8064516129 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8387096774 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32258064516 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826429044448 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229775329572 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375680766581 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729116473025 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211377323177 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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