Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
no i am completely disagree with this statement bocause i think that traveling with a group led by a tour guide make us limited by some rules and we will not enjoy from it. but i think to travel with a group of my friend will be so fun. also i like to travel with my family, although i like to be free in traveling and i can go every where in every time that i want, also i prefer to travel with someones who i know them and i am familiar with their behavior. in travel i love to see night and day in there. if i travel with my friends, i will enjoy because i can say them any thing that i want and i can speak about our memories and events that we have with each other. also some times i like to be with my family only and having good times them such as cooking with my mom or my sister, playing chess with my father, playing vollyball with my brother and so on. i think this purpose will never happened with a group by a tour guide because sometimes all of us (familly or friends) have not free time for the tour. i love to travel to many country in every where of world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.90867579909 4.8611393121 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06358343608 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1870981689 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230264618055 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117564509836 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651415747087 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230264618055 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.69 10.9000537634 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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