Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
The trend nowadays is towards having healthy life that it relies of health and strong body. A strong body can overcome a hectic life hands down. More and more individuals should know that a strong and potent body needs physical exercise. I feel this way because of couple of reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, in every levels of sophistication state particularly a developed society should invest in healthy life with long term strategies such as, healthy food, physical exercise and so on. There is no doubt in my mind that exercise make a contribution to release tension, reduction of stress, and feel fresh in case of mental diseases. Moreover. The medical scientists suggested that doing a regular exercise give more oxygen to lungs that resulted in facilitate blood circulation, regulate of pressure of blood and others. Also, doing exercise help to consolidate the muscle that lead to a sportsmen enable to handle versatile task in his work and household chores. For example, when I had carried out my master thesis that I had to doing many task such as the field and laboratory research. Sometimes I fell a sense of frustration and weakness that resulted difficulty for handle my tasks. After a while, I doing exercise in the gym club of my campus, I feel fresh and vigorous in order to overcome of my hectic lifestyle at that time.
Secondly, there it is no doubt that doing a regular and accurate for exercise will give an aesthetic body. A beautiful forms of body is very important either for male or female gender. One of the critical factor for models, actors and actress are having a proper and beautiful shapes of body that can help them in successful in film and fashion industry. as for my opinion, an formed body gives more confidant to individuals.
One obvious conclusion to be drawn is that the sports or exercise is essential/inevitable activity for humankinds that lead to healthy lifestyle and help to decline of medical and mental disorder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sportsman' or simply 'sportsmen'?
Suggestion: a sportsman; sportsmen
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...ut my master thesis that I had to doing many task such as the field and laboratory resear...
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...lty for handle my tasks. After a while, I doing exercise in the gym club of my ca...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'form'?
Suggestion: form
...ill give an aesthetic body. A beautiful forms of body is very important either for ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...uccessful in film and fashion industry. as for my opinion, an formed body gives mo...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for example, i feel, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76226663432 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8754896696 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12948405578 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391950119829 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317977176143 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719423143257 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291906424983 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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