Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
Get exercise on a regular basis
Eat healthy food every day
Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people say that working out on a regular basis and also having healthy food regularly are the main factor to keep a good health life. However, others state otherwise. They think that merely visiting doctors rife for exams is enough to keep up the health life. In my opinion, getting exercise regularly and eating health food day by day are the primordial cause for a health life. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, everyone should exercise daily because this not only promotes a healthy body but it also relieves some chemical substance to our brain which is capable of promoting welfare. For example, running everyday releases such chemical component to our brain which makes us feeling happy and going to the gym also releases the substance and our body gets thinner. Therefore, those examples illustrate the desideratum of exercising regularly to maintain our body healthy.
Moreover, having healthy foods helps to maintain a good weigh and to control organism in order to fend off further drawbacks. For instance, eating a balanced diet with products based on vegetables and salads will provide a balanced diet which helps to get in control of our organism and weigh at the same time. In addition, healthy foods may be helpful in avoiding further ailments that our body might develop. Thus, those instances elucidate the necessity of controlling gain weigh and organism through healthy foods.
Finally, I strongly believe that working out regularly and eating health foods quotidianly help to control physical conditions because they help to prevent diseases, they maintain the body conditions in a good way and they control the weigh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...promoting welfare. For example, running everyday releases such chemical component to our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04676258993 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49375027524 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7009130623 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 5.45110844103 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189859714852 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684692856903 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047842392819 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110253430512 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281130498297 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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